Friday, December 2, 2011
Creation myth
A long, long time ago, and I mean centuries ago, a man named Caleb Lehmann met a girl named Anna Mortinsen. Caleb lived in switzerland and Anna lived in germany. Both were traveling to America through Ellis island when they somehow came to notice each other and started to speak. They understood each other a little bit. Not too much of a languae barrier. They must have liked each other because after years of courting Anna, Caleb finally asked for her hand in marriage and she finally accepted him, he got down on one knee and did the whole proposal thing. Of course back in those years women didn't have the courage to say " NO". Nor were they really allowed to. Let's just say society and proper bring up prevented that. But it was a good thing that they fell in love. After having 4 children, (Youch!) right after getting married, their little family grew. Those 4 kids grew up and fell in love with others to. So after they got married and all had children, it was the grand kids turn to do the falling in love. Two of the cousins fell in love, deeply in love. To my surprise they fell deeply in love with each other. I know, odd. But back on those days no one even cared if you married your mom. Marrying was a part of life. As long as you did it you were socially acceptable. Marrying your cousin was no big deal. So anyways when Emma Lou and Freidrich actually said "I DO" it wasn't far behind that they would start a huge family. Emma had 11 children, unfortunately only 7 of the original 11 survived. And since society repeats itself they grew up and made more families. It was really about repopulating the earth. Then my grandmother Laura was born. She met my grandfather Fred and had three boys. My dad being the middle child. For my Moms family history, I don't really know anything about it. My Mormor and Morfar ( grandma and grandpa) both came from Denmark. They met each other at the young age of 19. When my Morfar had hair. And they had three girls. My mom being the middle child as well. When my mom was 20 something years old she went to work at Airgas welding as an analyst. My father already worked there do that is how they met. Don't ask me how long they dated cause I really don't care. My mom got married to my dad at age 25. Then he had my sister Katie when she was 29 and had me when she was 34. I was given the name Emma Susanne Lehman, named after my great aunt Emma. Yes even the one who married her cousin. So that is the person you see everyday.
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Great story posting about your genealogy and your family tree. Maybe go into details about yourself more or talk about what you would like the future of your family to be like.
ReplyDeleteWarm : love all the details you added and how far back you went .
ReplyDeleteCool : maybe break up the big paragraph and make multiple ?
Great job :)
I love your piece. I love the long line of history, it makes it interesting and keeps me reading. I also like your comments in the writing. The only thing I would suggest could be more showing and not telling. Thanks you for sharing! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThis made me laugh. In a good way. Like the line "and since society repeats itself they grew up and made more families." It's a fresh, comical way to address and avoid repetition in the "growing up and falling in love" cycle. With that said, I loved your casual voice through the whole piece. It kept it fresh and fun.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you can maybe expand on this: "somehow [they]came to notice each other" but if you can elaborate on it at all, that would really help your piece. "Somehow" noticing each other isn't much showing, but I do understand it was like forever ago so if you don't know details, at least try to get rid of the "somehow."
Also, I don't know if your brain missed this while writing, but you said "[they] fell in love, deeply in love. They fell deeply in love with each other." That repetition is awkward. You really don't need that second sentence.
Anyway, this was a very enjoyable piece to read. Your family history is interesting.