BJ's is deep in Pizza
2 years ago, my first visit to BJ's Brewery. I was sure it was just another burger place like Red Robin. From all the buzz on the street about it, it was a hot spot. My family decided to go. It was a Friday night, the worst time to go to a restaurant. We pulled up tons of people waiting outside and I immediately thought the worst. I was not in the mood to wait an hour just to have a burger and fries.
I walked in and saw how hoppin this place was. Bar striatum ahead and tables and booths every where else. Even a view of the brewery. The intoxicating smell of angus burgers and fresh fries.
We sat down and immediately our waiter came, introduced himself and got our drinks. Maybe 5 minutes later our order was in the kitchen.
For being so crowded the service was excellent. Refills before I ran out of soda, checking on you every 5 minutes to make sure the food is good.
The waiters are very pleasant. They address you by sir and ma'am. They clear the plates away when you are done eating. Motto mention the cute waiters that bring you your pizookie.
BJ's is definitely the place to go for burgers and fries.
I totally understand what you meant when you saw the line to go in because that is what i thought too. I thought that it was a really good piece, the fact that you described the burgers and fries as "intoxicating" was great.Overall i thought it was a good read. Thank you for sharing your piece with all of us.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained the place like when you said "the intoxicating smell of angus burgers and fresh fries. One suggestion I have for you is to explain a little more about the food and how it tasted.
ReplyDeleteAfter going to BJ's many times, i know exactly what you mean. I think i feel the same way every time. I think maybe if you described your feelings a little bit more and why the waiter was cuter, it was be a great piece.
ReplyDeleteWarm: i love the description in paragraph 2. nice work.
ReplyDeletecool:the story felt so rushed. get into further detail about everything else besides paragraph 2.